Goals

1. Support the topic, give reasons why


2. Examples


3. Connect to literature


4. Better word choice


5. Transitions between paragraphs


6. Order of Paragraphs







Thursday, November 4, 2010

Train Station

A young man and a gorgeous woman were waiting at an awesome train station. It was just about twelve o'clock noon on a fine Saturday afternoon when a man and a woman were at a train station. They were there because they were going on a trip to France. Sadly something  came up, their train was not stopping at the place that they needed it to. So then the man and woman needed to act on the spot, they needed to go find another train that could take them to the proper destination. The man decided he was going to go to the help desk so hopefully they could get him tickets to another train. Once the man got to the help desk the lady working there helped him and got him another train that was coming to the station at 3pm . After all the panic everything was calm and better the man and woman got on their train and headed to their vacation destination. Then in the end the got married and lived in France.