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Monday, November 7, 2011

Sodapop

Author's Note: The purpose of this piece is to explain more about Sodapop, and give more information about him. I would like feedback on if I'm summarizing.

Sodapop is a 16 going on 17, tall, athletic guy. He has 2 brothers,Pony and Darry and he is basically like a dad to them. He's a high school dropout because he wasn't a good student and he needed to work to support his family. Sodapop is a greaser because he is poor, so everyone kind of thinks he is a bad person. But actually he is a really caring and kind person, so I think he's actually really misjudged. One unique thing is that horses are his passion and no other greasers have passions, so that makes him special.

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