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5. Transitions between paragraphs


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Monday, January 23, 2012

Wedding

Authors Note: My goal for this piece was to write a creative story using dialogue and voice.

The day had arrived, the day that Morgan and Ben were getting married. All the preparations were made, and everything was finally ready.

Church service was at one, and the dinner started at five. It was seven thirty am and Morgan was just getting out of bed. "OH NO" she yelled, I only have thirty minutes until my hair appointment. She rushed to get dressed, and then ran down the stairs to grab something to eat. A short five minutes later she was in the car driving to the hair salon where she was going to meet all her bridesmaids.At seven fifty nine she was there, and ready to get her appointment started. When she walked in, everyone else was already there including her bridesmaids and her mom and sister. Immediately her mom, Wendy, said "Morgan why are you so late" and she replied "Sorry mom, but I over slept."

Everyone started getting called over to get there hair done. Each girl got a different style, but everyone's hair looked really cute. Once all the Bridesmaids had their hair done, they came over by Morgan to see what she was getting done. "Awww Morgan your hair is adorable" said he friend Rachel.

Thirty minutes later.... everyone's hair and makeup is done and they are leaving the salon. Next stop beach.

"OMG mom I'm so nervous"

"You look beautiful"

"Thank you" (HUG)

Caribbean music being played as she walks down the isle.

While Morgan is walking down the isle with her dad by her side, she is thinking to herself " Wow what does Ben think of me"

His breath caught as he saw her standing there, sunlight dancing in his eyes.

She had reached  the end of the isle. "You look stunning" said Ben.

45 minutes later..... 

 "And I now Pronounce you Husband and Wife"

Audience claps.... YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!


THE END............


TO BE CONTINUED








































      

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