Goals

1. Support the topic, give reasons why


2. Examples


3. Connect to literature


4. Better word choice


5. Transitions between paragraphs


6. Order of Paragraphs







Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Yes Ma'am Poems

 Authors Note: I decided to create 2 poems. One describing Mrs. Jones and the other describing Roger. I would like feedback on if I was descriptive enough.


Mrs. Jones
Large woman, with a big purse.
Very Intimidating to Roger and other people. 
Not afraid of people. 
Wise with how she handles things. 
Financially stable, with money to spare. 
Doesn't waste anything.

Roger
A teenage boy, struggling to survive.
Poor… he afford a pair of blue suede shoes.
Lonely, his family isn't ever around.
Hungry, he hasn’t eaten in a while.
Made a mistake by trying to steal Mrs. Jones purse.

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