Goals

1. Support the topic, give reasons why


2. Examples


3. Connect to literature


4. Better word choice


5. Transitions between paragraphs


6. Order of Paragraphs







Thursday, March 22, 2012

Chocolate Milk

Chocolate Milk
Oh how you are so good.
Your smooth and chocolatey  taste
And rich flavor

Delicious when I begin to taste the flavor.
Oh how, I love chocolate milk
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3 comments:

  1. Taylor's BlogMarch 22, 2012 at 7:43 AM

    I really like this poem! It makes me laugh!

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  2. AllieApril 5, 2012 at 7:16 AM

    I really like the way that you described the chocolate milk. I like how the poem was more upbeat.

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  3. GamzeeApril 5, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Thats exactly what I feel when I drink chocolate milk

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