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1. Support the topic, give reasons why


2. Examples


3. Connect to literature


4. Better word choice


5. Transitions between paragraphs


6. Order of Paragraphs







Monday, October 24, 2011

Are you proud of your country?

I am proud of my country, but there are things happening in America that I don't like. Every time I'm going through the T.V channels, I always here about crime and then people dying. We do have police here to keep us safe which is good. Also there are so many people without jobs, and the economy is very bad right now too. Hopefully in the future things will get better.

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