Thursday, October 13, 2011
Descption of a Beach
A scorching day on the beach, the beach is packed, there isn’t a spot to be found. Everyone is running for the water the second they get there. Perfect blue, water and white, clear, sand awaits. The waves come gradually into the shoreline where people wait for the water to hit their feet. It smells of sunscreen in the air. You can hear the “Wooshing” of the waves when they hit shore.
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This has some nice description. The sound of the wind, the packed beach, waiting for water to hit their feet; this is good imagery. Consider, though, the scent of sunscreen. Imagine someone from Alaska is reading your description, and has never needed sunscreen. He has no idea what it smells like. How would you describe it to him?
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