Goals
1. Support the topic, give reasons why
2. Examples
3. Connect to literature
4. Better word choice
5. Transitions between paragraphs
6. Order of Paragraphs
2. Examples
3. Connect to literature
4. Better word choice
5. Transitions between paragraphs
6. Order of Paragraphs
Friday, October 7, 2011
Hook
Sebastian is a 42 year old man, who specialized in the supernatural. However there is one problem, he doesn't believe in the supernatural. One day Sebastian was going to the 1960's Woodstock music festival. There was one problem, he passed out after the festival and has no way to return home to where he lives in California. No one wants to help him because he's a flower child.
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I wonder how a man who is not interested in the supernatural fell into it as a specialization? I'm sure that creates some good conflict for him! I'll admit, I'm more interested in his occupational problems rather than his transportation problems. In the future, you might consider picking just one conflict to begin hooks with.
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